This week we had to make a recount,I did a recount of my weekend,I writ the date for the days,I only writ about the important things I did on the weekends,anyways read my recount of my weekend and give feedback or feed forward and most of all enjoy!
Hello Mahina! my name is Julia from McAuley High School,I am a year 12, I like the way you have writ the date even that you didn't need to, I think you should take away the purple highlights please
Hello Mahina! my name is Julia from McAuley High School,I am a year 12, I like the way you have writ the date even that you didn't need to, I think you should take away the purple highlights please
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